Case study: Dog’s breakfast before and after
Do you want to go straight to the ‘Before’ and ‘After’ documents?
If so, click here.
If you’d like more detail, keep reading.
Editing documents in three steps
In the previous three articles, I talked about the quick tips and tricks I use when streamlining a complex and poorly-structured document. To give you an idea of my process, I’ve created a case study using a document by the fictional organisation, ‘Pacific Aged Care.’ You will see that it’s a poorly constructed and badly worded draft.
Establish the brief
Your first step was to establish the brief. You did this by asking your manager what the purpose of the document is, who it is intended for and what the organisation wants the reader to do after they’ve read it.
You now know that its purpose is to
- promote Pacific Aged Care to prospective residents and families.
You also know that its intended audience is
- the general public
- specifically, those who are considering going into aged care themselves
- or their family members who are considering aged care for a loved one.
Identify what you want the reader to do
Once they’ve read the document, you want the reader to
- feel reassured that Pacific Aged Care will look after them or their loved one,
- feel confident that this is the right place for them to live, and
- enquire further about Pacific Aged Care’s services and cost.
Knowing what’s expected of the document, it becomes clear that it needs to have a comforting and professional tone and be reassuring for families and individuals who are naturally feeling confused, conflicted or emotional at this time.
What’s been given to you to edit, however, is a collection of information from a whole lot of different people and documents.
To see the documents in the case study, including the cheat sheet, you’ll want the Marginal notes pack.
I’m happy to share this download for free on the proviso that you don’t copy and claim this as your own work, even if you change it a little or a lot.
That would be a bit rude.
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