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Feel, Felt, Found

Here’s a quick cheat sheet on ‘Feel, Felt, Found’ Those of you who found my last post on ‘Angry Customers Want to be Heard’ helpful might like to bookmark this.

Exploring picture books (Prep – Year 10) This workshop is a great way to engage students in their own creative writing practice. Younger children will discuss story ideas, plan their drawings and work towards a fini...

Killer first chapters

There’s a secret to writing killer first chapters, but you probably won’t like it. The secret is that you have to have something worth writing about. There, I’ve said it. You can write thousands of words, ...

After the first draft

A great way to improve your writing and to gauge if it’s meeting your expectations is to surround yourself with people who are as immersed in writing as you are and who will read your work and give you construct...

Commas don’t bite

As someone who has always loved the sound of words, the shape of them, their meanings and origins, I am regularly surprised when people baulk at the idea of learning how to put them together properly. The perception i...

"Great course. Marie is fantastic and I loved her passion for all things grammar!"

— D.T . Workshop participant , VIC

"Marie has been a regular guest to our College, and for good reason. As an expert, she leads our students in writer’s workshops, sharing her experience and wisdom in how to write creatively for a specific audience. Marie tailors her workshop to our needs and brings a wealth of knowledge that is presented in a fun and engaging way. Within minutes she builds a great rapport with students and it’s always a great session. Thanks, Marie!”

— O.A. English teacher, VIC

"The Grammar & Punctuation course was a brilliant refresher. The facilitator managed the groups exceedingly well, and was approachable, pleasant and engaging."

— A.B. Workshop participant , VIC

"I loved the motivation that Marie gave. I found her instruction easy to follow and enjoyed the tasks she gave us."

— L.G. Workshop participant, VIC

"I liked the lunchtime writing and observing task and the class involvement."

— P.P. Workshop participant, VIC

"Brilliant pitch techniques."

— R.A. Workshop participant, VIC

"Marie was very knowledgeable and engaging."

— G.W. Workshop participant, VIC

"Marie was knowledgeable and provided good examples. The material was delivered clearly and systematically"

— T.B. Workshop participant, VIC

"Marie was friendly and flexible in (her) approach to teaching, welcoming questions and supplementing discussion."

— G.K. Workshop participant, VIC

"Marie was an excellent facilitator. Made difficult concepts interesting and easy to understand. Also handled difficult students well."

— P.P. Workshop participant, VIC

"Engaging presenter who knows her topic well! Bravo!"

— R.L. Workshop participant, VIC

"The instructor, Marie, did not dwell on the technical definitions and explained with examples. She continuously asked logical questions making it easier to remember what a verb, pronoun etc are."

— M.L. Workshop participant, VIC

"The content was well delivered and easy to follow."

— T.R. Workshop participant, VIC

"The content of the course was very useful and dealt with common issues."

— M.F. Workshop participant, VIC

"The pace was good and the tone of the room very non-judgemental."

— V.F. Workshop participant, VIC

"I worked with Marie in 2020 to set up and run the Grammar and Punctuation online Short Course at RMIT University. She was very professional, easy to work with, and a great communicator. I had to dedicate a lot of time to train other teachers to use the collaborate ultra and canvas technology but Marie was already proficient with it and even taught me new tricks. I understand why the students loved the Grammar and Punctuation course so much; she is a very passionate expert in her field, patient and generous with her time."

— Frances Devlin, Course Coordinator, RMIT University, VIC

As a teacher Marie Alafaci excels. She taught with us for three years across a broad range of subjects, including fiction, nonfiction, industry overview and writing for children. She connects with her students on a personal level and cares deeply about what she does. Marie is always friendly, reliable, professional and trustworthy, and I would recommend her to anyone looking to develop or improve their writing skills.

— Tracey Rolfe, Course Coordinator, Professional Writing and Editing, Victoria University Polytechnic, VIC

Marie evaluated a draft of my novel. She gave detailed feedback on the plot, structure and language. Her analysis provided insights that I would never have gained on my own and she made many excellent suggestions to improve the manuscript. Her comments struck a perfect balance between affirming what was good in the work and opening up ways for me to improve. The benefits to me have been incalculable.

— D.K. Fantasy writer, VIC.

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Feel, Felt, Found

School workshops

Killer first chapters

After the first draft

Commas don’t bite